| starflyer5921:37 UTC21 May 2008 | Post an interesting poem below. Comments are ok, too.
"Shopping Urban"
Flip-flopped, noosed in puka beads, my daughter breezes through the store from headband to toe ring, shooing me away from the bongs, lace thongs, and studded dog collars. And I don't want to see her in that black muscle tee with SLUT stamped in gold glitter shrink-wrapped over her breasts, or those brown and chartreuse retro-plaid hip-huggers ripped at the crotch.
There's not a shopper here a day over twenty except me and another mother parked in chairs at the dressing room entrance beyond which we are forbidden to go. We're human clothes racks. Our daughters have trained us to tamp down the least flicker of enthusiasm for the nice dress with room to grow into, an item they regard with sullen, nauseated, eyeball-rolling disdain.
Waiting in the line for a dressing room, my daughter checks her cleavage. Her bellybutton's a Cyclops eye peeking at other girls' armloads of clothes. What if she's missed something— that faux leopard hoodie? those coffee-wash flares? Sinking under her stash of blouses, she's a Shiva of tangled sleeves.
And where did she dig up that new tie-dyed tank top I threw away in '69, and the purple wash 'n' wear psychedelic dress I washed and wore and lost on my Grand Tour of Europe, and my retired hippie Peace necklace now recycled, revived, re-hip?
I thought they were gone— like the tutus and tiaras and wands when she morphed from ballerina to fairy princess to mermaid to tomboy, refusing to wear dresses ever again. Gone, those pastel party dresses, the sleeves, puffed water wings buoying her up as she swam into waters over her head.
by Jane Shore
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| starflyer5922:42 UTC21 May 2008 | I also like this:
Wading Out
—Ad Duluiyah, Iraq
We're crossing an open field, sweating in December's heat, with First Squad covering from the brush to our left; and I could be shot dead by a sniper, easily, this could be the ground where I bleed out in ninety seconds, but it won't be. There's a patch of still water I'm about to walk into as I always do, with too much adrenaline and momentum in my stride, as my boots sink ankle deep and still I slog forward, M4 held up over my head, though Fiorillo sinks up to his knees off to my right—he backs up, makes it out of the septic runoff I'm up to my thighs in, the stench filling my nostrils now, and it's funny enough to laugh at once the mission's over, Turner running in to swim, but no one's laughing anymore and the months are turning into years gone by and still I'm down there slogging deeper into the shit, shoulder deep, my old platoon with another year of bullets and mortars and missions dragging them further in, my lieutenant so far down I can't reach him anymore, my squad leader hunting for the souls that would mark him and drag him under completely, better than any bottle of whiskey, and I keep telling myself that if I walk far enough or long enough someday I'll walk out on the other side. But will Jax and Bosch and my lieutenant make it out, too? If one day we find ourselves poolside in California, the day as bright as this one, how will we hose ourselves off to remove the stench, standing around a barbecue talking football—how will we do that?
Brian Turner
after Bruce Weigl
Edited to add the poet's name
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| niner23:06 UTC21 May 2008 | That doesn't rhyme either.
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| starflyer5904:04 UTC23 May 2008 | Gecko
Blessed be the morning of childhood when I found myself sister to the gecko acrobat. On the wall of the room utterly at ease just like me tumbler on the edge of the planet.
Astrid Cabral
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| niner04:11 UTC23 May 2008 | Navajo Windtalkers speak your name in reverent tones.
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| starflyer5904:22 UTC23 May 2008 | I'll try to take that personally; thanks.
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| starflyer5922:05 UTC23 May 2008 | A Flow of Army Ants
They came. No one knew from where. Legions and legions: minuscule steps minute blades. . . They came without warning like so many other cataclysms. Cunning in the pitch-black night they came to disembowel Surinam cherries and strip bare the mango trees. They came in a rage, slow but treacherous. The muffled sound of the crunching of the stalks came to us beneath our sheets. With the trembling of the leaves there also came to me my fear of their scissors cutting my nails and body hair eyelashes eyebrows my very curls my nightgown lacework, all snipped to bits. I could see myself in little pieces dragged off by force by that crackling, greenish flow, crawling down the drowned backyard on my way to the frying pan of the ants hidden in the realms of hell.
Astrid Cabral
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| starflyer5904:53 UTC31 May 2008 | Salon
She sat before a "hair technician" who talked with his hands, that is, he wasn't paying attention to her hair, which he parted and sheaved and tied into a dozen tiny bundles.
To discourage deer or other animals, scatter hair around your garden.
Imagine her scalp sowed with rice seedlings, blonde shoots shaped like Ys, bound with purple rubber bands.
Worse than a hair in your soup, is a long one pulled from a bite of meat.
She was polite, though the man wasn't worth it, and foul water stirred under her "nice" membrane.
Hair is an outgrowth of dead skin, keratins, proteins, chains of amino acids also found in hooves, feathers, teeth.
It was her first dance, first date, first time she had her hair done. She stood in the shower, distraught, ripping out the little plants.
That it continues to grow after death is a myth.
She thought she would die, would rather be dead than dance with such hair.
It is true when a girl sinks, her hair spreads like a flower across water, the last of her to go under.
--by Sarah Gorham
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| starflyer5905:35 UTC31 May 2008 | I like "Salon" because it reminds me of being 14 and getting ready to go to a formal school dance; my mom tried to help me do something fancy with my hair, but I was stressed out about looking good enough, and wasn't satisfied with anything. I had chosen a very modestly-cut dress, and suddenly realized how out of place I'd look with my peers. I hoped my date wouldn't be disappointed. Anyway, dashing Phil danced with me-- Phil with his saucily flipped green tie, sparkling eyes and ruddy youthful countenance.
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| niner06:12 UTC31 May 2008 | What an odd poem. Strangely compelling, and I hate poetry.
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| starflyer5906:19 UTC31 May 2008 | Yes, I agree that it's odd and compelling-- some complex imagery there.
I don't like all poetry, either, but there are some pieces that pack a punch.
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| starflyer5923:20 UTC04 Jun 2008 | "A Rainy Country"
"Je suis comme le roi d'un pays pluvieux" —Baudelaire
The headlines and feature stories alike leak blood all over the breakfast table, the wounding of the world mingling with smells of bacon and bread.
Small pains are merely anterooms for larger, and every shadow has a brother, just waiting. Even grace is sullied by ancient angers. I must remember it has always been like this:
those Trojan women, learning their fates; the simple sharpness of the guillotine. A filigree of cruelty adorns every culture. I've thumbed through the pages of my life,
longing for childhood whose failures were merely personal, for all the stations of love I passed through. Shadows and the shadow of shadows.
I am like the queen of a rainy country, powerless and grown old. Another morning with its quaint obligations: newspaper, bacon grease, rattle of dishes and bones.
-Linda Pastan
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| starflyer5902:09 UTC12 Jun 2008 | My Father Swearing
Bitch, he’d say, always, when he could not work the wood his way, bitch, as if there were a goddess of all his troubles, grinning, a woman at the wellspring who skewed the nail, split the joist, drove his hefted hopes deep into the ground, bitch, his woe, his wound, his eldest curse.
And we would gather, hidden, my brothers and I, huddled like shepherds by the door to the shed to hearken to the litany surely to follow, the dam that would burst, his power and rage, hammer and tongue.
Bastard then, predictably, and a marriage was made, like an Adam come lately to a paradise of swearing, the bitch and the bastard driven out of the garden to bedevil him further, to beat the bejesus, like a two-headed god, both mouths washed out with soap, come to witness, come to share in the blame.
Then son of a bitch, and it all became clear, a family, procreation, the Gilgamesh epic, a new generation gathered against him, and we were the children and he was the father as he battered the wood, the precision gone out, gone into the word, the word become flesh.
Then, always, incarnate, the rhythm established, a flurry, a billingsgate of bitch of a bitch, and bitch of a bastard, and son of a bitch of a bitch of a bastard. There structure was born, prepositional phrases, like blue Chinese lanterns hung out beneath the moon, this swearing to God, this awful begatting.
We broke at that point, skedaddled, running off to the lilacs, covering our mouths for fear we’d be heard, to say in that darkness what was forbidden in the light, a language mixed with laughter lifting up between the trees, a forefathers’ song, the words that made the world.
-- John Hodgen
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| montereyjack03:46 UTC12 Jun 2008 | Good stuff. Thanks! That Iraq one especially.
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| starflyer5901:09 UTC15 Jun 2008 | montereyjack-- yeah, I was pretty amazed by the impression left by that one, too.
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| starflyer5901:10 UTC15 Jun 2008 | Gift
All our righteousnesses are as filthy rags; and we all do fade as a leaf —Isaiah 64:6
After my mother's father died, she gave me his morocco Bible. I took it from her hand, and saw the gold was worn away, the binding scuffed and ragged, split below the spine, and inside, smudges where her father's right hand gripped the bottom corner page by page, an old man waiting, not quite reading the words he had known by heart for sixty years: our parents in the garden, naked, free from shame; the bitterness of labor; blood in the ground, still calling for God's curse—his thumbprints fading after the flood, to darken again where God bids Moses smite the rock, and then again in Psalms, in Matthew every page. And where Paul speaks of things God hath prepared, things promised them who wait, things not yet entered into the loving heart, below the margin of the verse, the paper is translucent with the oil and dark still with the dirt of his right hand.
Brooks Haxton
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| starflyer5915:53 UTC17 Jun 2008 | One Must Divorce Oneself
:from the trouble. From the woman walking out with the box of herself from the man. That rattle on the backseat. From the man's ache as he lights the stove and the stalled whatwhatwhat begins to stew. From the dog wagging from one to the other: who who who holds the leash to the former life?
Nance Van Winckel
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| starflyer5901:02 UTC18 Jun 2008 | Yesterday I saw a bumper sticker that read: "We're staying together for the cats."
Edited by: starflyer's feline secretary
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| ritablue10:30 UTC20 Jun 2008 | "Cosmopolitan greetings" by Allen Ginsberg
Stand up against governments, against God.
Stay irresponsible.
Say only what we know & imagine.
Absolutes are coercion.
Change is absolute.
Ordinary mind includes eternal perceptions.
Observe what's vivid.
Notice what you notice.
Catch yourself thinking.
Vividness is self-selecting.
If we don't show anyone, we're free to write anything.
Remember the future.
Advise only yourself.
Don't drink yourself to death.
Two molecules clanking against each other requires an observer to become scientific data.
The measuring instrument determines the appearance of the phenomenal world after Einstein.
The universe is subjective.
Walt Whitman celebrated Person.
We Are an observer, measuring instrument, eye, subject, Person.
Universe is person.
Inside skull vast as outside skull.
Mind is outer space.
"Each on his bed spoke to himself alone, making no sound."
First thought, best thought.
Mind is shapely, Art is shapely.
Maximum information, minimum number of syllables.
Syntax condensed, sound is solid.
Intense fragments of spoken idiom, best.
Consonants around vowels make sense.
Savor vowels, appreciate consonants.
Subject is known by what she sees.
Others can measure their vision by what we see.
Candor ends paranoia.
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| starflyer5914:29 UTC20 Jun 2008 | Profound... Lots of smashing lines in this.
I like:
Notice what you notice.
Catch yourself thinking.
...
Candor ends paranoia.
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| starflyer5916:49 UTC24 Jun 2008 | A Men's Choir
The voice one has when talking to small children and large dogs is not the same as that at the barber's or from the lectern. It comes from another life from far, far away one that maybe never existed
whereas the voice one has when caressing a woman's breast or belly is a third voice that comes from a third world (green warm moist shadow under huge ferns, marshland, and huge birds that fly up). And there are many, many more.
Not my own voice— and not exactly that of anyone else. Is there such a thing as the voices in between? I recall your foot still warm with morning. I imagine they must be like that. And if one could hear all the voices at the same time one would get the impression of a men's choir defiantly executing a breakneck series of dissonances.
by Lars Gustafsson (translated from Swedish)
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| starflyer5904:01 UTC25 Jul 2008 | Two Poems
Spring
My feelings just took a turn for the better While thinking of white flowers turning into strawberries, Of clover turning into bees, of crowds of wisteria Swelling and swelling.
People often think I have a friendly dog, but it is just me: My wide arm-span for folding tablecloths, my feet that seem worn Not just by me, but many.
I had this feeling once before, when I was walking through rain And wet leaves in shoes that were red and navy. Much of me hadn't been tried out, and I liked that.
Annulment
I've ruined my marriage, but still I enjoy the hum of nature, And the pleasure of greeting a kindly pedestrian When I have the chance.
Make no mistake, I'm fond of my bungalow. Returning home at night, I can't resist waltzing a bit With my valise. I let my right foot go first, Since it's my favorite.
I live a quiet life, thinking of what to say, Heeding the call of the wild, removing my sunglasses in tunnels. I never refreeze, though I may try it one day.
By Angela Ball
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